1) Why would the lazy writers believe viewers would take the bait that the main character would leave the obit desk...the apparent impetus for the whole ghost gimmick & title of the series... in the second episode?! Really?
2) The inevitable trope-y will they/won't they BS between Nell & her roommate is furthered in this episode.
3) Another trope that every poor sitcom character MUST have a rich friend, in this case Cricket, the widow of Nell's 1st obit story (yeah, that's believable, sure) bc network execs fear realistic writing about being poor is a turn off for advertisers & also furthers those same execs fantasies about being benevolent philanthropists instead of the self-centered d-bags they really are. These characters are writers' get-of-jail-free cards for poor characters to avoid any real consequences of being poor, losing jobs, etc. Plus the writers can kiss up to the execs by saying xyz-character's generosity reminds said writers of xyz-executive.
4) Hannah Simone & Lauren Ash's characters are TERRIBLY written. What working moms do you know ever talk about their kids w/o ever mentioning them as individuals by name & what's going on with them or w/o mentioning schools/preschools/daycare issues or their partners/ex-partners involvement or lack there of or that of parents, in-laws, etc. We don't even know if Hannah Simone's or Lauren Ash's characters have spouses or exes. They aren't real characters just lazy-writer-plot-device-bandaids worthy of just a few uninspired sentences each. Badly underserved IMO.
All in all just a bad episode. Still no explanation about the ghost powers. No resolution of the intern office plot point (lazy writers couldn't be bothered to remember the way Nell got her ill-fated investigative article published in the 1st place). No impact of her article at all nor if it was good. Not mentioned by anyone other than to further a prev episode revealed character flaw about being impetuous. It's bad when a show's writers have less attention span than viewers within a single 20-22 min episode of content.
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