Had all the standard elements of a good story. A sympathetic dying cancer patient & a devoted lover to stay with her. Good vs. Evil with the unsympathetic bad guys trying to interrupt their relationship.
But, problems: Lots of holes in the storyline. Jimmy being coerced by parole to do an illegal crime. Intelligent decision would be to go to the police. $500,000 in drug money ended up where? Scrapyard Frank; motorcycle guy (for him a a too quick scene of a distant burial that wasn't intelligently thought out); and Schmidt, all of them needed a makes-sense denouement. How did Jimmy get the car valet job? Jimmy's ending in the boat? Finally, Annie?
If you're telling a story, it's your story, finish it; tie up loose ends. It's not my story.
But, problems: Lots of holes in the storyline. Jimmy being coerced by parole to do an illegal crime. Intelligent decision would be to go to the police. $500,000 in drug money ended up where? Scrapyard Frank; motorcycle guy (for him a a too quick scene of a distant burial that wasn't intelligently thought out); and Schmidt, all of them needed a makes-sense denouement. How did Jimmy get the car valet job? Jimmy's ending in the boat? Finally, Annie?
If you're telling a story, it's your story, finish it; tie up loose ends. It's not my story.