Opening scene: overeation
Then a big argument scene that didn't make sense. The titles establish that four years have past and they argue like they've just met.
The movie jumps around haphazardly with quick cuts. I guess this might be okay in a poetic sense, but the mostly improv'ed scenes just don't make sense in terms of character (see above example)
But this is a straightforward tale, after all, so these things don't come off as illustrating some deeper meaning. They just confuse the relationship that we are supposed to be being shown-they obscure the picture, not make it. They just come across as a first draft, a first go round. Messy. And unfinished. So,
The movie jumps around haphazardly with quick cuts. I guess this might be okay in a poetic sense, but the mostly improv'ed scenes just don't make sense in terms of character (see above example)
But this is a straightforward tale, after all, so these things don't come off as illustrating some deeper meaning. They just confuse the relationship that we are supposed to be being shown-they obscure the picture, not make it. They just come across as a first draft, a first go round. Messy. And unfinished. So,