Whoever wrote this must have spoken another language other than English, then decided to write an entire script in English. It was hard to even get through the 1st half.
The characters were unbelievable. For example, in the beginning, Mata Hari has a knife to her husbands's throat, who was just trying to rape her, then he's "smart enough" to start yelling "please don't kill me" just as her daughter (who was stolen by him) and his new mistress (who he lied about) walk into the room. And what does she do? Sit on the floor with the rapist husband acting like she's mute all of the sudden. Oh, but then she ends up writing these elaborate letters to her daughter...yes, the mute! Such poor character development.
I hope this writer finds a new profession soon.
The characters were unbelievable. For example, in the beginning, Mata Hari has a knife to her husbands's throat, who was just trying to rape her, then he's "smart enough" to start yelling "please don't kill me" just as her daughter (who was stolen by him) and his new mistress (who he lied about) walk into the room. And what does she do? Sit on the floor with the rapist husband acting like she's mute all of the sudden. Oh, but then she ends up writing these elaborate letters to her daughter...yes, the mute! Such poor character development.
I hope this writer finds a new profession soon.