The plotline is typical Hallmark. And it mostly works. Plus, the early bickering is funny.
But I took issue with a few things. For one, why should she expect a "Thank you" for dropping a dirty coin in his drink? For another, she really crosses the idiot line when she gets engaged again. Thirdly, I guess that one couple was going for semi-elopement? Or is that how things are normally done at Niagara Falls?
The Falls themselves are beautiful, of course. And I didn't realize there was so much tourist stuff to do there.
But, really, with a little tweaking, the story didn't even need the ex-fiance.
But I took issue with a few things. For one, why should she expect a "Thank you" for dropping a dirty coin in his drink? For another, she really crosses the idiot line when she gets engaged again. Thirdly, I guess that one couple was going for semi-elopement? Or is that how things are normally done at Niagara Falls?
The Falls themselves are beautiful, of course. And I didn't realize there was so much tourist stuff to do there.
But, really, with a little tweaking, the story didn't even need the ex-fiance.