The characters were initially consistent and well developed, and, up until the last two chapters, the story was very engaging. Then the characters' internal logic disappeared and with that the story. The endong was absurd. I am not saying it from a moralist perspective but from a realistic one. How come someone who has been harassing women and cheating on his wife has a change of heart after a few hours of attending anti-machoist workshop? I am not an expert in ethical non monogamy but I find it hard to believe that a broken marriage suddenly works out after a threesome that just happened after everyone got drunk and high. Suddenly seems to know knows their place and role in a relationship involving the initally broken couple + the boyfriend. That happens just 'naturally' with little to no communication about past issues or boundaries. Sure.... marriage is dead but fixing a relationship - of whatever nature - would take a lot more than that.
Review of Everything Will Be Fine
