I recommend the plot on giving Emma a normal life, a competitive field of learning and enrichment, friends and good social stutus. Tho it could atleast potray some emotions to this stutuses and how a psychopath would relate to them and reduce the mirror scene to one good scene. I feel like as the viewer I only get Emma's reaction to social statuses is through a very not convincing mirror scene.
Second I feel as tho the character Kat could have been expanded to give Emma a reason to watch out. Now I feel as though she's dead, she has not made any impact or difference to the film. A good background to her story should give her a good reason to follow Emma to the new town or try to atleast bring out the beast in Emma at a public place. If Kat had a parner, not even mentioned. I mean it looks random and poor story line to challenge a psychopath without a plan B.
We don't know if emma loved her aunt or she was just collateral in her big scheme but a tear drop or an emotion would have brought out something new about emma showing that she felt suddend about loosing someone who tried to give her the whole world. This would mean that ger aunt won't find out about her psycopathic nature but be atleast suppotive and welcoming to an orphan, this will give character emphasis on the uncle as someone who tries to prove Emmas nature.
There are some psycopathic natures they got wrong: first of all Emma would have released the baby to fall in the pool if she knew her aunt had arrived. This means she was trying to spice up a beef and not kill the baby. But on the scene Emma did want to kill the baby and her aunt luckily arrived.
Secondly her uncle found the knife after seeng Emma's open drower. In reality Emma would have closed the drower as its a petern she wouldn't deviate from and her uncle shouldn't have found the knife at all.
Thirdly, Emna should have given us a good reason as to why she should be dance captain, this scene was interrupted by Kat and in my opinion Emma could have looked Kat in the eyes and pose showing that Kat has crawled into her skin or give us a reason why she sees herself a good captain without Kat interrupting.
Second I feel as tho the character Kat could have been expanded to give Emma a reason to watch out. Now I feel as though she's dead, she has not made any impact or difference to the film. A good background to her story should give her a good reason to follow Emma to the new town or try to atleast bring out the beast in Emma at a public place. If Kat had a parner, not even mentioned. I mean it looks random and poor story line to challenge a psychopath without a plan B.
We don't know if emma loved her aunt or she was just collateral in her big scheme but a tear drop or an emotion would have brought out something new about emma showing that she felt suddend about loosing someone who tried to give her the whole world. This would mean that ger aunt won't find out about her psycopathic nature but be atleast suppotive and welcoming to an orphan, this will give character emphasis on the uncle as someone who tries to prove Emmas nature.
There are some psycopathic natures they got wrong: first of all Emma would have released the baby to fall in the pool if she knew her aunt had arrived. This means she was trying to spice up a beef and not kill the baby. But on the scene Emma did want to kill the baby and her aunt luckily arrived.
Secondly her uncle found the knife after seeng Emma's open drower. In reality Emma would have closed the drower as its a petern she wouldn't deviate from and her uncle shouldn't have found the knife at all.
Thirdly, Emna should have given us a good reason as to why she should be dance captain, this scene was interrupted by Kat and in my opinion Emma could have looked Kat in the eyes and pose showing that Kat has crawled into her skin or give us a reason why she sees herself a good captain without Kat interrupting.