Sean Malin is an aspiring filmmaker that brings out very creative ideas for a story like this. However, I believe he could do better. Things like writing is important to a good film, as it brings out the best of it all to its audience. It's also worth noting that if he could bring more emphasis on morals to give the audience a strong liking. I could give examples: add in more jokes, making them funnier, furthering character development and so on could give greater impact on a short film like this. Maybe in the future, more themes may be added to diversify the feelings and emotions that the story brings to make viewers think of their feelings of the story.
Overall, the story is fine, but there is more room for development for someone like him to start. I say keep going and move on, improve.
Overall, the story is fine, but there is more room for development for someone like him to start. I say keep going and move on, improve.
- A. K. Enoch.