I really liked Jodie as the Doctor, which is why I think she deserved a better script for her introduction episode. I'm not a film or TV critic by any means, in fact my standards for the quality of writing and acting are pretty low. But even I thought the dialogue between the family in the opening felt wooden and unnatural to the point of being cringeworthy.
To make matters worse, it seemed like the Doctor was a side character for the first half of the episode. Matt Smith's introduction went more or less straight into the action, and without deliberation delivered a good first impression of him as a character - as well as his to-be companion.
In Whittaker's introduction, it spent what felt like an age trying way too hard to introduce and develop the side characters, yet failed to make them interesting or memorable as it A: did not have enough time to do so, and B: provided them with dialogue so unnatural I couldn't relate to them as human beings at all.
To top it all off, Grace's death near the end was just lazy writing. She had no good reason to die. By this point The Doctor had already sent the Halo Master Chief back to his home planet, yet Grace still ignored her advice - and as anyone would, promptly climbed up the crane to electrocute the big fuzzy ball of wires to death and fell thirty feet on her back without so much as an "oof".
Then. just like in real life, she was given ten precious seconds in which to utter some touching and absolutely not clichéd last words before peacefully passing away of falling-thirty-feet-onto-her-back-related injuries. All the while expecting the audience to feel bad for such a random, silly, unnecessary death of a character who was never fleshed out enough for me to really care.
The good though? The cinematography was excellent. It did feel out of place at some points, but the atmosphere and suspense in the train crash scene was excellent. And even though it felt like it took an age to get there, The Doctor's introduction was pretty well done.
I don't know. Whittaker saved it towards the end but all in all I'm probably just going to try and forget that this episode exists like I did for most of Season 9. The upcoming episodes look very promising though, so despite this episode I still have hope for the rest of the season.
This has been an internet neckbeard who naively thinks anyone cares about IMDB user reviews, signing off.
To make matters worse, it seemed like the Doctor was a side character for the first half of the episode. Matt Smith's introduction went more or less straight into the action, and without deliberation delivered a good first impression of him as a character - as well as his to-be companion.
In Whittaker's introduction, it spent what felt like an age trying way too hard to introduce and develop the side characters, yet failed to make them interesting or memorable as it A: did not have enough time to do so, and B: provided them with dialogue so unnatural I couldn't relate to them as human beings at all.
To top it all off, Grace's death near the end was just lazy writing. She had no good reason to die. By this point The Doctor had already sent the Halo Master Chief back to his home planet, yet Grace still ignored her advice - and as anyone would, promptly climbed up the crane to electrocute the big fuzzy ball of wires to death and fell thirty feet on her back without so much as an "oof".
Then. just like in real life, she was given ten precious seconds in which to utter some touching and absolutely not clichéd last words before peacefully passing away of falling-thirty-feet-onto-her-back-related injuries. All the while expecting the audience to feel bad for such a random, silly, unnecessary death of a character who was never fleshed out enough for me to really care.
The good though? The cinematography was excellent. It did feel out of place at some points, but the atmosphere and suspense in the train crash scene was excellent. And even though it felt like it took an age to get there, The Doctor's introduction was pretty well done.
I don't know. Whittaker saved it towards the end but all in all I'm probably just going to try and forget that this episode exists like I did for most of Season 9. The upcoming episodes look very promising though, so despite this episode I still have hope for the rest of the season.
This has been an internet neckbeard who naively thinks anyone cares about IMDB user reviews, signing off.