My hope is starting to wane for this series. I figured that it might have a rocky start, but never thought that we'd be getting such lumps of coal for episodes. I really want to be more positive, because I really wanted to see some great Trek back on the small screen, but given what this series has put out so far, this is not likely.
Forgetting, for a moment, that this is Star Trek, this episode doesn't even have good story writing. The pace of the episode is slow, the plot is convoluted, and the escape from the Klingon ship was way too easy for Captain Lorca. Without giving away too much in spoilers, you really need to build tension to the maximum before you release the trigger. Episodes of the Iron Chef build tension better than this: my heart pumps faster wondering whether Bobby Flay will really get that last dollop of whipped cream on the plate just in time than it did for this episode. Whether this is bad scripting, bad directing, or bad editing, I don't know. There is no question in my mind where the apex of the episode was, but the build up was too fast. Predictably, you actually know exactly what is going to happen, and when it unsurprisingly went down there was not even a glimmer of that 'will-they-make-it-or-will-they-not' suspense. This was not even good for mediocre TV.
Then there is the sci-fi element here. Maybe I'm alone in this, but the mycelium blink drive/organic propulsion system is not only an out- there idea, it's lousy science fiction. Making it, again, the centerpiece of an episode really strained my nerves. When they added the giant, space water bear (tardigrade) into the equation, it really got implausible to the point of loony. This episode takes an further leap into the far-fetched and ludicrous. And again, this episode led to a terribly predictable plot point, although the sacrifice was made by different character than I expected... and that was not a good thing.
Which leads us to the major faux pas with this episode: our heroine Burnham was sidelined at some point in the episode and never really got into on the action. She's one of the stronger characters that they've created, so it's not clear why the writers hobbled themselves by taking her out of the equation. On the bright side, she didn't do anything monumentally rash/stupid this time.
I am not a purist and I don't really care that the Klingons look different from Klingons in TOS/the movies/Next Gen etc. But why are they covered with so much prosthetic makeup and stiff clothing that the actors can do little but speak their parts? It is virtually impossible for the actors to express themselves through all that stuff. Kudos to Doug Jones who ekes out as much expression as he can through his total face makeup and contact covered eyes. At least his body is unencumbered by wardrobe ballast.... (Big plus, this time, having an English speaking Klingon. This beats having the actors break their teeth on Klingonese and speak it so slowly you could read the subtitles twice and still have time to spare.)
The bright leaf on the pavement here was Rainn Wilson's Harry Mudd. Rather than channel TOS actor Roger C. Carmel, Wilson gives a great performance making Mudd far less jolly but more of a chaotic neutral opportunist with a comedic edge. It would have helped if the writers could have given him a little more in the way of cogent dialogue, but Wilson has the acting chops to add dimension to this character where little was written here.
So far, Discovery has Starfleet, starships, recognizable uniforms and insignias, Klingons, etc., but it really doesn't yet have much of that Star Trek flavor. While the writers spend their time writing disjointed action scenes and over-intellectualizing bad sci-fi concepts, we are desperately lacking a Star Trek message here. I get the darker tone- -we had that with DS9, but even on DS9 there was a glimmer of optimism that shot through. Where is the notion that we have an optimistic future ahead of us filled with excitement and wonder? If you want apocalyptic sci-fi you might as well tune in to just about any other series produced today.
Lets hope this is just the beginning jitters and that there is something better afoot. If not, I'll be canceling my CBS subscription. I'll give them another month. And while we're at it, it would be great to start rounding out the characters, mapping out real plot lines, and adding at least some semblance of pathos. (Note to writing staff: adding a couple F-bombs is not a substitute for pathos.) CBS is clearly paying a bundle for this series--they'd be better off dialing it back on the special effects and getting some decent writing. Heck, I'll even settle for something with less Trek but more tangible Sci-fi and some relatable characters...
(If you want a more sugar-coated view of the episode, tune into After Trek. This is the post Discovery talk show where CBS gives itself a congratulatory slap on the back after each episode. Note to CBS: you wouldn't have to screen all your 'guests' on the post-Trek show if you put out a quality episode. Ramp it up and you will have real fans giving real praise...)
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