This one is a real dilemma kiddies. Especially with all the outstanding movies currently being released It's hard not to compare so I shan't make that mistake. STRAY BULLETS - A feature movie written, directed, produced, music composer, & acted in by a 16 year old (even with Dad's production company assistance) is a magnificent achievement by any standard. But the lack of experience here is glaringly obvious. Regrettably the script meanders willy nilly around an open field with no definitive or positive bearings followed. There are unnecessary elements added with no rhyme or reason. Many, many tracks are trodden only to culminate in dead ends for unexplained reasons. Many, many tracks that should have been explored more fully are suddenly closed leaving the viewer lost and wondering who and why. Disjointed editing made for unclear, hard to understand and random appearances by characters that seemed to have no influence on the story These are scattered throughout whilst the major players are not fleshed out at all. Unfortunately the story line was also very far-fetched and quite unbelievable. Perhaps we needed a bit of padding for an admittedly quite short (83 mins) feature but we certainly don't need a 2 minute pan across unused pianos to get to the piano player and then another 2 minutes for him to get up and walk across a room to a ringing phone. He answers the phone, we get no conversation just a cutaway to a random tractor driving down some street, not really worth the wait. If you produce a dramatic scene at least let us hear what/why/who it's about
The soundtrack quite frankly is atrocious, badly placed, distracting, overly intrusive and constant. It goes from African drumbeat inspired to Catholic hymns over a silent face pan and romantic swing whilst wiping blood out of the car is just plain weird. It also doesn't help when two of your major sideline actors were terrible. I mean TERRIBLE!.. Not too sure where they earned their acting chops but the fathers were appalling actors. The slo-mo shooting/dying scene at the park was over acted & cringe worthy. The actor who played the Ash's father had the emotional acting depth of a snail. SHOCKING! Most scenes with either of these two in it should have been scrapped before release and they both should have been sacked on the first day of the shoot. The exit, stage front, final scene is also dragged out to painful extreme but a camera angle of 45 degrees on a moving vehicle driver is a preposterous and very visible error that should have been rectified. It's a learning process obviously for young Jack (I sure as shite couldn't do it and I'm a lot older than 16) so this should be used for what it is, a few positives whisked together with many negatives resulting in a very flat cake but educating all to produce a better recipe in the future. Yep, that's right kiddies incredibly Jack is also listed as "chef" in the final credits
The soundtrack quite frankly is atrocious, badly placed, distracting, overly intrusive and constant. It goes from African drumbeat inspired to Catholic hymns over a silent face pan and romantic swing whilst wiping blood out of the car is just plain weird. It also doesn't help when two of your major sideline actors were terrible. I mean TERRIBLE!.. Not too sure where they earned their acting chops but the fathers were appalling actors. The slo-mo shooting/dying scene at the park was over acted & cringe worthy. The actor who played the Ash's father had the emotional acting depth of a snail. SHOCKING! Most scenes with either of these two in it should have been scrapped before release and they both should have been sacked on the first day of the shoot. The exit, stage front, final scene is also dragged out to painful extreme but a camera angle of 45 degrees on a moving vehicle driver is a preposterous and very visible error that should have been rectified. It's a learning process obviously for young Jack (I sure as shite couldn't do it and I'm a lot older than 16) so this should be used for what it is, a few positives whisked together with many negatives resulting in a very flat cake but educating all to produce a better recipe in the future. Yep, that's right kiddies incredibly Jack is also listed as "chef" in the final credits